little x soldier

Is great! Short lines with much meanings. The rythem, rhyming and structure, is what I liked.... It's like telling, with words, about a dark time.. Yay! Keep on!

H-hey Nicola.. Welcome.. um may I ask why this is the same as 'Poem I wrote for my best mate' ? It was posted almost around the same time.... I ...

mmmm all right.. Good point about 'lovely' what about 'unique shaped' instead... and I guess about the last 'imprints' shouldn't be there.. and maybe neither in the fourth stanza.. I'm ...

The background?? That's my ripped off page out of my religion note book.. I'm sorry if the letters are a bit unclear to you... And the color it's the best ...

Folowing part.... My Hero is a soldier. He is shown as anonymous and can be any of the soldiers out there but this soldier is different from all others. I ...

Was great to me.. the one that knows my darkside caged and calloused through time hungry for one damn thank you Taking the first parts over was a great ending ...

isn't it what happens when your angry.. maybe you could rewrite it when you calm down or when you are.. wow the most replies you got!

does those underlined counts? The lyrics seem good to me ( goodbad ) but not sure about the timing and/or counts...

It reminded me directly of Breakaway- Kelly Clarkson... And maybe Brad is right... and I think it's more on may not be good.. Well, it's not you who have written ...

Great piece of explanation, you got! 'even though the rhyming is bad and such..' Actually I liked the rhyming and especially that every line ended with 'Y' And the last ...